This is my final draft, I have changed the name and the colour and I put a 3-D shadow effect on it which makes it more prominent and attracts the readers eye. I moved things around like the price and the month the magazine is released and the issue number. I put a shadow effect on the other features within the magazine.
Points for you to consider:
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* You are going to have to really justify your name choice as Tame doesn't strike me as a magazine title for a rock magazine - you will need to convince me in your planning because right up until you posting this I had no idea as to your research and planning. This is worth 20% of your marks and at present you are looking at the "basic/minimal" level.
* John Hayes - the artist's name should be put together as one phrase.
* The text could all be given some effects such as drop shadow to help raise it up.
* Does your research magazines have both an issue number and a date/year? If so, have a look where they are placed and see if you need to make changes.
* Price would not be on the outside right of the barcode. Go back and look at your research to advise this.
Have you kept your first attempt??? It is important to show the progression.
ReplyDeletePost the new one and then say what you changed - improves your mark for planning.